Zaf's Sprite/s

[MarcZaf]

well even though it's been a year or two I'm still working on this


hope those who were members of OBZ still remembers this

[Rhonoc]

I really like the effects.
Can't say much about the sprites themselves, for I haven't done sprites in years and have become rusty in it. Can't see so much detail as well as I used to.
But I'd suggest editing the pants. They look too much like the original ZX version.
These are minor-edits, right? Or what ever you call them.
I'd suggest you start doing scratch sprites.
They aren't as hard as they seem. I think you have the skills for them.
Try it.
Other than that, quite a large sheet you have there. Very nice. Keep it up

[MarcZaf]

Oct 25, 2010 10:09:31 GMT -5 Rhonoc said:

But I'd suggest editing the pants. They look too much like the original ZX version.
These are minor-edits, right? Or what ever you call them.
I'd suggest you start doing scratch sprites.
They aren't as hard as they seem. I think you have the skills for them.
Try it.
Other than that, quite a large sheet you have there. Very nice. Keep it up

good Idea...
I'll try it

EDIT:
hmmm... I wonder what kind of pants will look good on him?
skinny jeans(LOL),baggy,shorts?
any suggestions?
just a small update
Zafer ver0.5.3.4

[Rhonoc]

go for shorts
that would go well i think

[MarcZaf]

... fail X(
shorts doesn't look good...

Edit:
(tried something middle aged)
still no good
>_> oh god I feel like recoloring

[Rhonoc]

then i don't know
If nothing else goes, go for baggy pants.
I hate skinny pants. Even in real life i hate them, makes me sick.

[MarcZaf]

well while thinking of how to do that I managed to make this

"The Crimson Red Executioner"

his weapon is an axe not a sword XD

[Zir0-N]

That is one wicked cool Axe. The detail is excellent on the handle and the edge itself is smoothly curved. Yet, I still don't feel a hit of sharpness. Highlight the edge pixels a little more to give it more of a gleam, that is what I suggest.

The sprited character is good, not too much I can say on it really, maybe add a extra light color to the cloak/coat for more volume and detail. Also, from my view, the top of the hood is a bit on the flat side. Puff it out some more on the top. Any extra details, like coat strings and sleeve cuffs I'll leave for you to deal with.

See you next update.

[Rhonoc]

After what Zir0 said, I have nothing left to say.
Only thing I can suggest is that give the cloak some wrinkles.
It's too smooth. No piece of clothing is like that.
And, as the weopn is an axe, I think that a longer handle will make it look more badasslike.
Other than that, really cool sprite.
Keep it up!

[MarcZaf]

I'll work on those later and now my weakness...
I dunno why but I decided to call her Alice
for now I just started with the head


don't mind the one below with the sudden light portion

[Rhonoc]

Actually that looks really good!
But it looks like she has half-opened eyes.
And btw what is that blue thing around her head? Headphones? It is too low for that.
Other than that, good work.
Keep it up!

[MarcZaf]

update, but not on alice(still thinking of what she should wear)
Zaf got a haircut

[Rhonoc]

Pretty good.
But I have some things to point out.
Firstly, as I love weapons, I'd like to point out that you never hold a weapon so straight.
I'd suggest making a 30 degree angle() or something like that, there was a exact number, but forgot ). Then it should almost touch the ground with the front part.

Ok, that was about the sword. (Had to point it out. I love weapons )

Now for the hairdo.
It looks quite nice, but the top part looks too solid. Like the top part doesn't have hair at all, only some kind of metal. I'd suggest adding a hair line or two there.

Also one other thing, but that's not an error, but only my personal preference.
The pants on *his* right foot should come a little on the shoe. It would look in my eyes a lot better.

Other than that, it looks quite good.
Keep them coming!


~Rhonoc

[MarcZaf]

thanks
been busy lately
Updated some sheets, made some new characters,
cause I'm about to make a comic(I already PM'd some people to burrow sprites for it)
anyway here they are

Reito

CREx(Crimson Red EXecutioner)

Aezeroth(-_-' this was a request by my friend)

My Neighbor(but with weapons)

[Rhonoc]

really good work
one thing though
all of the cloth your characters wear, look too straight....
give some wrinkles.

other than that, good work
I espacually like aezeroth, with his flying swords